Nooooooooo
Wow.. I stupidly clicked on 0 when I was trying to get this window back into focus, but I wanted to give you a 3 at least.
Here's the lowdown:
Your artwork could use a lot of work, you need a style and artistic knowledge to make it look nice, so work on both and it'll be better.
Sound also needs some work, try getting someone to mix it so the levels are right, because all the dubs are really high frequency and it's hard to listen to.
Other than that, not bad man, I'll probably go watch the other two now.
Keep it up. :)