Lol
Not bad, could be greatly improved, but for a second flash it's pretty good. Now for some advice:
1.) Learn flash better, I can see that you didn't really use layers (or so it seemed)
If you take some time to watch some tutorials or read up on some of the functionality of the program you will be greatly rewarded. :)
2.) Keep the file size small. Don't import full songs, just clips, it keeps the file smaller.
3.)Writing skills and timing. Gotta learn to be creative in a way that everyone will like, and time everything (like the text transitions) so people can read them and understand them.
But overall, not bad man, keep it up!
P.S.
you got an extra star for using my music. ;)