tonzie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blue. Trailer [canceled]]

I was expecting worse.

However, this flash was pretty nicely done.
At first it seemed as if it was somewhat noobish, because of the quick flash of the second shot. Threw me off a bit.
The video developed nicely though, and your art style is nice. Keep it up! :)

OfficialFredLozano responds:

Yeah, that quick flash annoys me. I've been trying to figure out a way to fix that, but nothings come up.

Thank you for the kind words.

[Signature]

It was cool..

But people don't want to just see this sort of stuff. Don't get me wrong, it was pretty nice looking, just make an animation to include it in hahaha.
Good work.

TheSpicanator responds:

hahah yeah i know. I just havnt posted anything. and i figured what better place then newgrounds. But hey thanks for the review

[Stranded Gamers Ep: 3]

Nooooooooo

Wow.. I stupidly clicked on 0 when I was trying to get this window back into focus, but I wanted to give you a 3 at least.
Here's the lowdown:
Your artwork could use a lot of work, you need a style and artistic knowledge to make it look nice, so work on both and it'll be better.
Sound also needs some work, try getting someone to mix it so the levels are right, because all the dubs are really high frequency and it's hard to listen to.
Other than that, not bad man, I'll probably go watch the other two now.

Keep it up. :)

Crendor responds:

I noticed the sounds as well. I'll work on it.

[Luis]

looooooooooool

To be honest, I blammed it with a 0, but I'm giving you a good review because it's a good concept hahaha. Work on your animation skills though, honestly, not bad though.

tankbuster781 responds:

Fuck, a zero? Couldn't have been THAT bad, seriously. This was not really suppose to be submitted on newgrounds, I actually made this to show my friends at school ( oh god, you should've seen them laughing) They liked this animation because they KNOW this stuff was true. Him crying about his cellphone being taken away, him saying he is going to tell the principle when I call him fat and stuff. all that shit was true and stuff. What was I talking about again? Oh yeah, a zero? My animations are not like this by the way. Check out music movie, that thing is about a month old before I submitted it but it is pretty current with my animation

[J WEBB]

Sorry..

..but you are crap, not newgrounds. It's called fixing the stage size when you upload the video, newgrounds gives you the option and you didn't use it properly, so don't blame the site for your mistake.
Aside from that, I'm going to criticize your flash.
It sucked. Badly.
Graphics were horrible, and I mean HORRIBLE, learn2animatelololol
music was annoying, but that's just my taste.
That's about it. Re-submit it when you have a good flash.

DwarfGlock responds:

you dont have alot of room to talk buddy, those stick dress up games of yours are cute though

[School 13 - I H8 X-MAS]

Hahaha pretty good.

Not bad man, the only thing I didn't like about it was the pausing between scenes, the pauses were too long. Other than that, it's really well done. In my opinion, the art is front page worthy. Keep it up.

Nightwayfarer responds:

comments about previous toons were "a little to short, a little bit longer would be better"... i guess this time it's a little to long, a little bit shorter would be better :D

[Lord of the Kings 2.0]

Lol

Not bad, could be greatly improved, but for a second flash it's pretty good. Now for some advice:
1.) Learn flash better, I can see that you didn't really use layers (or so it seemed)
If you take some time to watch some tutorials or read up on some of the functionality of the program you will be greatly rewarded. :)
2.) Keep the file size small. Don't import full songs, just clips, it keeps the file smaller.
3.)Writing skills and timing. Gotta learn to be creative in a way that everyone will like, and time everything (like the text transitions) so people can read them and understand them.
But overall, not bad man, keep it up!

P.S.
you got an extra star for using my music. ;)

demus1 responds:

hey thanx for the advice :D

[Emo Boy Ep.1]

Lol how?

8 stars just because of that message hahaha.
What is the script for that? lmao.
Thats wicked, if you could message me with it that would be sweet.
Again, smart idea lol, good job.

cHunter responds:

Why message you when I could just respond with the answer? :P

Just call it as you would any other variable:

_root.ng_username

[DBZ Ep.1]

Eh, not bad.

That actually wasn't bad, I was expecting something HORRIBLE, but it amused me. Not a big fan of any flash related to a story which has already been told (dragonball z) but it was good, kept me watching. Good job.
Only advice, speed things up a bit, it will look nicer.
Keep em comin. :)

Kflame responds:

thank you, i have already started number 2 and it is faster