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Style = Cream in my pants.

I LOVE your drawing style, man you should have finished it, very nice job.

Wow.

Ok, this is actually pretty cool. It's like all of us at newgrounds could watch you develop as a flash animator. No offense, but your first flashs sucked, except for the sprite one, then #4 got better, and now this. Good job, keep up the good work.

I CANT STOP

I can't stop listening to it lol, it just loops and loops hahaha. Good job.

AH lol

LOL dude that scared the SHIT out of me. Good job.

Not bad.

Drawings could be a lot better, sound quality could be greatly improved, there wasn't much of a style there, and I dunno.. it lacked something.
But for your first animation, it was good, great job guys, keep at it and soon you'll be better than you though. And good luck with that animation club ;)

Eh, not bad.

That actually wasn't bad, I was expecting something HORRIBLE, but it amused me. Not a big fan of any flash related to a story which has already been told (dragonball z) but it was good, kept me watching. Good job.
Only advice, speed things up a bit, it will look nicer.
Keep em comin. :)

Kflame responds:

thank you, i have already started number 2 and it is faster

Not Bad.

Pretty good for your first flash on Newgrounds. It sounded fine to me, didn't sound like the sound was messed up at all.
A couple things:
Compress the sound in the swf file a bit more, your flash was about a minute and a half long and it was 7mb. That's because the mp3 file you used was big, and it was uncompressed, or compressed very little. Look in the forums for guides on how to optimize your flash file size.
Also, try working on your style more, so many flash's have been made the way you made yours, so do something to make it your own, add some flare. Other than all that, it looks like you have potential.
Keep at it.

aaaaaaaaahahahahahaha

That was really good man, graphics could be greatly improved, so can the audio quality, but the story was just funny. Really good job with your references hahaha, like the WoW mounts, and the "pulling agro". Made me lol hahaha. Looking forward to seeing more by you.

Almost Perfect.

Haha dude, that was awesome. Very interesting story, and really well done for your first flash. And about the inexperience, you'll get better and faster with time. Can't wait to see the next episode. Good luck!

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