tonzie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Luis]

looooooooooool

To be honest, I blammed it with a 0, but I'm giving you a good review because it's a good concept hahaha. Work on your animation skills though, honestly, not bad though.

tankbuster781 responds:

Fuck, a zero? Couldn't have been THAT bad, seriously. This was not really suppose to be submitted on newgrounds, I actually made this to show my friends at school ( oh god, you should've seen them laughing) They liked this animation because they KNOW this stuff was true. Him crying about his cellphone being taken away, him saying he is going to tell the principle when I call him fat and stuff. all that shit was true and stuff. What was I talking about again? Oh yeah, a zero? My animations are not like this by the way. Check out music movie, that thing is about a month old before I submitted it but it is pretty current with my animation

[J WEBB]

Sorry..

..but you are crap, not newgrounds. It's called fixing the stage size when you upload the video, newgrounds gives you the option and you didn't use it properly, so don't blame the site for your mistake.
Aside from that, I'm going to criticize your flash.
It sucked. Badly.
Graphics were horrible, and I mean HORRIBLE, learn2animatelololol
music was annoying, but that's just my taste.
That's about it. Re-submit it when you have a good flash.

DwarfGlock responds:

you dont have alot of room to talk buddy, those stick dress up games of yours are cute though

[The Jankouski Carp]

LOOOOOOOOL

I was not expecting the end lol, it was pretty random and funny hahaha.
Overall, I really liked the art style, even though you had to use your mouse instead of some sort of tablet or something, it was nice. The animations were fluid and not hard to look at (like most flash animations hahaha) and all around the brush smoothing was laid out nicely, which made for a good looking flash.
The sound was pretty good, not too much, not too little, and you didn't let it take up the full flash size. In all, it was a good animation. Good job. :)

[Rusty's Redemption]

Hahahaha

I laughed a lot at that lol, good job.

[School 13 - I H8 X-MAS]

Hahaha pretty good.

Not bad man, the only thing I didn't like about it was the pausing between scenes, the pauses were too long. Other than that, it's really well done. In my opinion, the art is front page worthy. Keep it up.

Nightwayfarer responds:

comments about previous toons were "a little to short, a little bit longer would be better"... i guess this time it's a little to long, a little bit shorter would be better :D

[Lord of the Kings 2.0]

Lol

Not bad, could be greatly improved, but for a second flash it's pretty good. Now for some advice:
1.) Learn flash better, I can see that you didn't really use layers (or so it seemed)
If you take some time to watch some tutorials or read up on some of the functionality of the program you will be greatly rewarded. :)
2.) Keep the file size small. Don't import full songs, just clips, it keeps the file smaller.
3.)Writing skills and timing. Gotta learn to be creative in a way that everyone will like, and time everything (like the text transitions) so people can read them and understand them.
But overall, not bad man, keep it up!

P.S.
you got an extra star for using my music. ;)

demus1 responds:

hey thanx for the advice :D

[Emo Boy Ep.1]

Lol how?

8 stars just because of that message hahaha.
What is the script for that? lmao.
Thats wicked, if you could message me with it that would be sweet.
Again, smart idea lol, good job.

cHunter responds:

Why message you when I could just respond with the answer? :P

Just call it as you would any other variable:

_root.ng_username

[Press Start: Devil May...]

Very Nice!

This is the first time I've actually heard anything about this series but it looks to me like I'm going to be watching more. Keep em comin man, this is awesome.

[This Movie Makes No Sense]

Lolz

Not bad, pretty random hahahaha. I liked that about it, but animations could use a little work.
P.S. I didn't hear my music in it, so why exactly is it credited? :P

[Sprite A Day : 24]

Nice.

Definitely making a sprite flash for tomorrows submission ;)